Friday, 12 March 2010

Similar Films By Alexander Martin



Rocky

Rocky Balboa, Sylvester Stallone, a Philadelphia boxer, is but one step removed from total bum-hood. A once-promising pugilist, Rocky is now taking nickel-and-dime bouts and running strong-arm errands for local loan sharks to survive. Even his supportive trainer, Mickey, Burgess Meredith, has given up on Rocky. All this changes thanks to super-boxer Apollo Creed, Carl Weathers. With the Bicentennial celebration coming up, Creed must find a "Cinderella" opponent for the big July 4th bout some unknown whom Creed can "glorify" for a few minutes before knocking him cold.

Aside from the obvious boxing similarities, in terms of story there isn’t much difference between Rocky in our film that it follows the life, challenges and achievements of an otherwise underdog athlete, however while the projects end story and message is the same “second chances and opportunities”.

Their story beginning are different, where Rocky Balboa began at rock bottom to be given a lottery drawn chance our protagonist was at the top of his game from the beginning which I feel made his losing of it all and his eventual reclamation of it makes it a lot more meaningful. There is the old saying “you never know what you’ve got till its gone” which is the prominent message at the beginning of the project.

The sequels to Rocky also serve as similar films in that once Rocky achieves the title he begins taking it for granted which leads to him being unprepared in Rocky 3 and his loss of it, naturally this leads to a journey of discovery which our protagonist, Mike Dawson, must endure after his release from prison.






8 Mile

With the help of his friends, and his new girlfriend Alex, Brittany Murphy, Rabbit, Eminem, struggles to work up the courage and the confidence to take one more shot at making his dream of escaping inner-city Detroit a reality.

The central premise maybe different in that this is set around a completely different profession however the overall story is relatively similar in that an underdog achieves something where others believed he couldn’t. However unlike Rocky this film is closer to our film in that Rabbit is a very capable of achieving his dream at the beginning but just lacks confidence.

Both Mike Dawson and Rabbit share the feelings and emotions of going from an area of relative comfort to a lesser position in that Rabbit goes from having a relationship and living independently to having to return home and Mike goes from being a potential athlete to convict and then ostracized by those who previously supported him.

Also both protagonists almost take up a life of crime in order to support themselves until realizations hit and they realize it’s not what they dreamed for themselves and are turned around.

Thursday, 11 March 2010

Shooting script, new draft.- Ian Uttley

Shooting script-The redemption
Interior-Corridor-Daytime


SHOT 1 Medium shot of Mike (main character) walking
Backwards tracking
SHOT 2 MLS of coach standing outside of doors waiting for Jermaine
Handheld with very slight camera movement
Slow pan to the left as coach begins to open the door
SHOT 3 Reverse shot of Mike answer his coach’s question as he pauses before he goes through the door.
SHOT 4 Medium shot of Mike and Coach the begin to walk through the door
Interior-Conference room-Daytime
SHOT 5 Medium shot from the opposite side of the door as the two characters walk through in to press conference
SHOT 6 Establishing shot of conference room with the press seated to the lower left of the shot Mike and coach walk toward table
SHOT 7 Close-up of Mike walking past the camera as he glances at the journalists in the audience. It is filmed from his front and the audience will be located on the left outside of shot.
SHOT 8 Medium long shot of the two characters getting to their seats. It will be filmed from a similar angle as the previous shot and a part of the table will be visible.
SHOT 9 Medium Shot of coach stood behind the table with Mike on the left and the opposition’s coach on the right
SHOT 10 Establishing shot of the Press, shot from the front of the room
SHOT 11 CU of Vladimir looking towards coach
SHOT 12 Medium shot, coach sitting down and having a quick look around
SHOT 13 Shot reverse shots in CU and members of the press and the person being asked the question
SHOT 14 CU of press member and then a reverse to Vladimir, shot of Vladimir is slightly low angled and showing mainly the left side of his face
SHOT 15 Medium shot of coach looking towards Vladimir as he bangs his hand on the table
SHOT 16 Medium long shot of Mike shouting towards Vladimir.
SHOT 17 Long shot of the whole table as Mike and Vladimir stand up.
SHOT 18 quickly cuts to medium shot of the two boxers with coach between them breaking them up
SHOT 19 medium shot of Mike shot from a very low angle and reverse shot of Vladimir with same framing and angle, cuts to gym scene.
Interior-Boxing Gym-Daytime
SHOT 20 Long Shot of coach and Mike walking in to gym , Following with track
SHOT 21 medium shot of coach from where Mike is stand with Mike just in the front left of the shot.
SHOT 22 Medium close up of mike as he begins to work the bag
SHOT 23 Long shot of them working with the bag, end of scene.

Risk Assessment 2 By Alexander Martin

Risk Assessment 1 By Alexander Martin

Shooting script first draft- Ian Uttley

Shooting script-The redemption

Interior-Corridor-Daytime

SHOT 1 Medium shot of Jermaine (main character) walking

backwards tracking

SHOT 2 MLS of coach standing outside of doors waiting for Jermaine

Handheld with very slight camera movement

Slow pan to the left as coach begins to open the door

Interior-Conference room-Daytime

SHOT 3 Establishing shot of conference room with the press seated to the lower left of the shot

Jermaine and coach walk toward table

SHOT 4 MS of coach stood behind the table with Jermaine on the left and the opposition’s coach on the right

SHOT 5 Establishing shot of the Press

SHOT 6 CU of Vladimir looking towards coach

SHOT 7 M coach sitting down and having a quick look around

SHOT 8 Shot reverse shots in CU and members of the press and the person being asked the question

SHOT 9 CU of Jermaine looking down at the table

Camera moves slowly towards him to an XCU of his eyes

Interior-Boxing Gym-Daytime

SHOT 10 LS of coach and Jermaine walking in to gym

Following with track

SHOT 11 MLS of Jermaine punching punch bag

Punches softer as he turns round

SHOT 12 MCU of coach and reverse shot to Jermaine

SHOT 13 Similar to shot eleven except he keeps punching the bag

Monday, 8 March 2010

Treatment 2 By Alexander Martin

Title: Redemption - It’s Now or Never

Duration: 90 mins

Genre: Biography / Drama / Sport

Audience: Rated 12
12-30 Year Olds

Due to the violence, occasional swearing and mild drug affiliation

Gender: Mostly Male, Hoping to attract women by the handsome protagonist.

Synopsis:

- Successful Barnsley boxer, set for global stardom.
- Arrested a week before a fight for GBH and gang affiliation.
- Released after a year to find family rejects him and boxing leagues forgotten him.
- Nearly gets involved with same gang again until old coach interferes and cleans him up.
- Gets a job and displays a willingness to change when starts boxing again.
- Makes attempt to reconcile with family but is turned away.
- Opportunity strikes with top ranked opponent, same as year ago.
- Opponent against the fight due to protagonist being a criminal.
- He learns about main characters conviction and try’s to exploit it.
- Protagonist is baited to protect family member and is arrested.
- Gets released one week before fight on self-defence.
- Lack of training means he loses fight but is given re-match.
- Nothing can be pinned on opponent but is later mobbed by gang, now fans of protagonist.
- Family recognises protagonist struggle and support him during and after fight.

Suggested Elements:

Gritty Realism
Set in local town of Barnsley
Features up and coming actors
Features some recognised TV extras
Use of actual professional fighting environments

Appeals to a local audience and the use of up and coming actors, recognised British extras and genuine professional fighter’s environment will appeal to critics in terms of reliability and also attract others who want to see new talent.